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Starlight
Стр.146-147 Модуль 5 ГДЗ Starlight Баранова 10 класс
Баранова, Дули, Копылова
10 класс
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Баранова, Дули, Копылова

Стр.146-147 Модуль 5 ГДЗ Starlight Баранова 10 класс

Задача

Приведем выдержку из задания из учебника Баранова, Дули, Копылова 10 класс, Просвещение: Unit 5.9
Writing: Argumentative
Expressing an Opinion
Your personal opinion on a topic should be expressed in the first main body paragraph and the conclusion. Use phrases such as In my opinion and I believe rather than the more emotional I think. Always include reason s/examples to justify your opinion and opposing viewpoints.
Plan
Introduction
Para 1
Introduce the topic
Main Body
Para 2
Your opinion + arguments with justifications
Para 3
Opposing viewpoint + arguments) with Justifications
Para 4
Counter-argument to opposing viewpoint with justifications
Conclusion
Para 5
Summarise topic and restate your opinion using different words
1 a) Read the rubric and then the model. What is each paragraph about? Which paragraphs contain the writer’s opinion?
RNE Comment on the following statement:
Travel broadens the mind.
All that glitters is not gold.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
Thanks to package deals and budget airlines, more people have the opportunity to travel abroad these {lays. But just how true is it that travel broadens the mind?
In my opinion, travelling to other countries gives us a broader understanding of the world, firstly, it presents an excellent opportunity to learn about another country’s culture. For example, going to museums, cultural events and festivals when on holiday can give a unique insight into the local people and their history. Secondly, we can sample another cuisine. Trying different food means discovering new and enjoyable tastes and even learning new ways of cooking.
On the other hand, some people argue that travelling abroad does not make for greater cultural understanding. They point out that many tourists avoid meeting local people. Instead, they prefer to mix with other tourists in their hotel. They even eat the same food they would have at home.
However, it is really up to the individual to make the most of their experience abroad. It is important to choose the right kind of holiday. For instance, volunteering on an eco-holiday will teach you far more about local culture titan staying at a tourist resort.
In conclusion, it seems to me that travel can oiler a wealth of new experiences. It need not be just a home-from-home holiday with fellow-tourists. Instead, we can learn a lot about foreign culture, history and cuisine. In the words of America actress Solange Knowles, «You get educated by travelling.»
b) List the arguments in the essay. What justifications are used to support them? Copy and complete the table.
2 Rewrite the sentences introducing essay topics using words of your own.
1 Tourism has become a widespread phenomenon In today’s world, but to what extent Is It beneficial?
2 Space exploration Is a costly business. Can we justify it when so many people in the world are still going hungry?
3 Our lives today are very different from those of our grandparents. This raises the question of whether we are better or worse off.
3 Use the language in the table to write sentences, as in the example.
Useful expressions for giving opinions
I believe/think/feel (that) …
I strongly believe …
In my opinion/ view…
The way I see It, …
It seems/appears to me (that)…
To my mind…
I (do not) agree that/with …
My opinion is that …
As far as I am concerned. …
I (completely) agree that/ with…
I (strongly) disagree that/ with …
I am totally against ….
I couldn’t agree more that/with …
I couldn’t disagree more that/with …
I am totally opposed to …
1 we/help/poor -> their lives be easier
I strongly believe that we should help the poor. If we were to do this, then their lives would be easier.
2 students/study/abroad Improve language skills
3 people/have vegetarian diet be healthier
4 we/all use/public transport pollution be reduced
Giving opposing viewpoints/counter arguments
4 Use the useful language in the box to write full sentences.
On the other hand …
Alternatively … .
It can be argued that „..
However…
In contrast …
Nevertheless…
1 better education/deter people/from crime
2 people argue/education/necessary/get a well-paid job
3 ban cars from city centre/not help reduce pollution levels
4 some people argue/computers/make our lives easier
5 a) Read the rubrics. What do you have to write for each?
1 RNE Comment on the following statement:
Young people shouldn’t watch so much television because it promotes violence.
Reading books is a waste of time in the dynamic 21st century.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words
2 RNE Comment on the following statement Cars should be banned in urban areas and people should use public transport.
Old buildings should be pulled down to find place for new projects.
What is your opinion? Do you agree with this statement?
Write 200-250 words.
b) Match the quotations to the rubrics. Which agree/disagree with the topic?
QUOTATIONS
1 “In an advanced city, even the rich use public transport. “ Enrique Penalosa, Colombian politician
2 “Television is full of fictional and real violence that’s turned into entertainment”
Bill James, American author
3 “Seeing a murder on television can help work off one’s antagonisms.”
Alfred Hitchcock, English film director
4 “Everything in life is somewhere, and you get there in a car.”
E.B. White, American author
c) Write one of the essays in Ex. 5a. End it with a quotation. Check for the following:
Checklist for Argumentative Essays
Organisation/Language
Does your piece of writing follow a specific plan?
Does your Introduction state the topic clearly?
Is there a different paragraph for each mam point?
Have you used topic sentences?
Are there Justifications for the main points?
Does the conclusion summarise the mam points?
Have you used an appropriate style?
Have you used advanced vocabulary?
Are ideas connected by linking words?
Are points presented in a logical sequence?
Is spelling/grammar/punctuation correct?
*Цитирирование части задания со ссылкой на учебник производится исключительно в учебных целях для лучшего понимания разбора решения задания.

Подробный ответ

1a

Paragraph 1 — introduction to the topic and the writer’s opinion.

Paragraph 2 — the writer’s opinion and arguments with justifications.

Paragraph 3 — opposing viewpoint with justifications.

Paragraph 4 — counter-argument to the opposing viewpoint with justifications.

Paragraph 5 — conclusion and restatement of the opinion.

The writer’s opinion is expressed in paragraphs 2, 4 and 5.

1b

ArgumentsJustifications
Travelling broadens our understanding of the world.It gives us an opportunity to learn about another country’s culture.
Travelling helps us discover new food and cooking traditions.We can try different cuisine and learn new ways of cooking.
Travelling abroad does not always lead to greater cultural understanding.Many tourists avoid meeting local people and stay with other tourists in hotels.
The right kind of holiday can teach us a lot.For example, volunteering on an eco-holiday gives more insight into local culture than staying at a tourist resort.

2

1. Tourism has become a widespread phenomenon in today’s world, but how far is it really beneficial?

2. Space exploration is very expensive. Can it be justified when so many people in the world are still hungry?

3. Our lives today are very different from those of our grandparents. This makes us wonder whether we are better or worse off.

3

1. I strongly believe that students should study abroad. If they did, they would improve their language skills.

2. I believe that people should have a vegetarian diet. If they did, they would be healthier.

3. In my opinion, we should all use public transport. If we did, pollution would be reduced.

4

1. On the other hand, better education can deter people from crime.

2. It can be argued that education is necessary to get a well-paid job.

3. However, banning cars from the city centre will not help reduce pollution levels.

4. In contrast, some people argue that computers make our lives easier.

5b

Rubric 1: quotations 2 and 3.

Agree with the topic: 2.

Disagree with the topic: 3.

Rubric 2: quotations 1 and 4.

Agree with the topic: 1.

Disagree with the topic: 4.

5c

Young people should not watch too much television because it promotes violence. In my opinion, this statement is partly true. Television can have a negative influence on children and teenagers, especially when they watch violent films and programmes every day.

To begin with, television often shows scenes of crime, aggression and cruelty. As a result, young viewers may become less sensitive to violence. Moreover, they can copy bad behaviour they see on the screen.

On the other hand, some people argue that television is a useful source of information and entertainment. They say that many programmes are educational and help young people learn about the world.

However, I believe that television should be watched in moderation. Parents should control what their children watch and encourage them to spend more time reading, doing sport or communicating with friends.

In conclusion, television is not completely harmful, but too much of it can be dangerous for young people. As Alfred Hitchcock said, “Seeing a murder on television can help work off one’s antagonisms.”



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