Упр.2 Юнит 4.10 ГДЗ Starlight Баранова 11 класс

Приведем выдержку из задания из учебника Баранова, Дули, Копылова 11 класс, Просвещение: 2 Read the model. Copy and complete the paragraph plan. What techniques has the writer used to start/end his essay? Suggest an alternative beginning/ending.
Over the last few years, as our town population has been steadily growing, crime, traffic accidents and litter have all been increasing. This has made it a much more dangerous, unpleasant place to live. What can be done, therefore, to make our town a better place to live?
Firstly, steps should be taken in order to deal with the rise in crime. One possible solution would be to increase the number of police officers patrolling the streets. In this way, we would certainly deter criminals. Measures should also be taken to reduce traffic accidents Banning cars in certain areas would help, but also lower speed limits should be imposed. This would undoubtedly prevent accidents and save many lives.
Finally, it would be a good idea to stop people littering. More bins and fines for offenders would deal with this problem. As a result, our streets would be much cleaner.
In conclusion, there are several ways in which we can reduce crime, traffic accidents and littering. By doing this, we will make our town a more pleasant place to live in. After all, as someone once said, “Happy towns don’t happen by accident.”
*Цитирирование части задания со ссылкой на учебник производится исключительно в учебных целях для лучшего понимания разбора решения задания.

Ответ

Paragraph plan:

1. Introduction — the writer describes the main problems in the town and asks a question.
2. Main body, paragraph 1 — crime: increase the number of police officers patrolling the streets.
3. Main body, paragraph 2 — traffic accidents: ban cars in certain areas and impose lower speed limits.
4. Main body, paragraph 3 — litter: put more bins around and fine offenders.
5. Conclusion — the writer sums up the solutions and ends with a quotation.

Techniques used to start the essay: the writer begins with a general statement about the town’s problems and then asks a rhetorical question.

Techniques used to end the essay: the writer gives a short summary and finishes with a quotation to make the ending more memorable.

Alternative beginning: Our town is facing several serious problems, such as crime, traffic accidents and litter, and something must be done to improve the situation.

Alternative ending: If these measures are introduced, our town will become safer, cleaner and more pleasant for everyone to live in.