Упр.4 Юнит 2.10 ГДЗ Starlight Баранова 11 класс

Приведем выдержку из задания из учебника Баранова, Дули, Копылова 11 класс, Просвещение: 4 The following letter is in the wrong style. Rewrite the underlined phrases to make it sound more formal
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing regarding your advertisement in the September issue of ‘Sporting News’ for English-speaking ski instructors m Italy during the winter holiday season. I really fancy doing this kind of work.
I am 18 years old and completed my secondary schooling this summer with satisfactory grades. I shall be commencing university in October, studying Sport and Physical Education. But that’s not all I also got my CSIA Level 1 ski instructors’ certificate in Canada last waiter, when I attended a five-week course there This means that I won’t have any problem teaching skiing from beginner to early intermediate levels. I am a native English speaker and also hove reasonably fluent Italian.
Your advertisement states that instructors would be teaching school groups. I feel that I would be suitable, since I regularly supervised excursions with younger classes during my last year at secondary school. Therefore, I think that this experience will come in very handy when it comes to teaching kids.
Please find enclosed my CV and a letter of reference from the Canadian ski school. I hope you get in touch soon.
Yours faithfully,
Arnold Thompson *Цитирирование части задания со ссылкой на учебник производится исключительно в учебных целях для лучшего понимания разбора решения задания.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in response to your advertisement in the September issue of Sporting News for English-speaking ski instructors in Italy during the winter holiday season. I would be very interested in doing this kind of work.

I am 18 years old and completed my secondary education this summer with satisfactory grades. I shall be commencing university in October, studying Sport and Physical Education. In addition, I obtained my CSIA Level 1 ski instructors’ certificate in Canada last winter, when I attended a five-week course there. This means that I will have no problem teaching skiing from beginner to early intermediate levels. I am a native English speaker and also have a reasonably good command of Italian.

Your advertisement states that instructors would be teaching school groups. I feel that I would be suitable, since I regularly supervised excursions with younger classes during my last year at secondary school. Therefore, I think that this experience will be very useful when it comes to teaching children.

Please find enclosed my CV and a letter of reference from the Canadian ski school. I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours faithfully,
Arnold Thompson