Стр.20-21 Модуль 1 ГДЗ Starlight Баранова 9 класс

Задача

Writing: A for-and-against essay

Read the rubric and answer the questions.
Discuss the following statement. Living in a flat has both advantages and disadvantages. Discuss both sides of the statement. Write your essay (180–220 words).
1. What do you have to write?
2. What style will you write it in?
3. How many words do you have to write?
1. Which of the following points are pros and which are cons?
  1. cheaper than houses
  2. can be noisy
  3. often has a good community spirit
  4. no private garden
  5. communal bills and maintenance
  6. often have balconies or shared roof garden
2. Put the points next to the following headings.
  1. cost
  2. neighbours
  3. outdoor space
Read the model. Which paragraph contains the following?
1. a pro and con regarding cost
2. a summing up and the writer’s opinion
3. a pro and con regarding neighbours
4. an amusing quotation introducing the topic
5. a pro and con regarding outdoor space

Read the table, then find the linking words/expressions in the model. Replace each one with an alternative.

Function	Useful language
to list	Firstly, First of all. To begin/start with. Secondly, Finally, Lastly
to introduce reasons/examples/justifications	This means that. For this reason. Consequently, As a result. For example/for instance, such as, like, in particular
to add a point	In addition (to this). Also, What is more. Not only this, but … as well as
to contrast	On the other hand. However, even though, although. In contrast. Nonetheless
to conclude	All in all, In summary, Therefore, To sum up, Taking everything into account, In conclusion, All things considered

What techniques does the writer use in the model to begin/end the essay? Choose either the beginning or the ending and write an alternative one using different techniques. Compare with your partner.
Find the three topic sentences in the model. Replace the topic sentences with other appropriate ones.
1. Put the sentences (A–E) in the paragraph in the correct order (1–5). Which is the topic sentence?
  Good Neighbours
  1. On the one hand, this can be an advantage in times of need.
  2. This is because your home should be your own personal space, not one that your neighbours can wander in and out of.
  3. The first thing to consider is how close neighbours live to one another.
  4. On the other hand, sometimes good fences make good neighbours.
  5. Popping over to borrow a tool or some sugar, for example, would only take moments.
2. Write supporting sentences for the following topic sentence using appropriate linking words/expressions in your notebook. Compare with a partner.
First of all, when buying a bicycle you should think about the cost.

Your Turn

Read the rubric and find the key words, then answer the questions.
Answer the following question. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in the city centre? Discuss both sides of the question. Write your essay (180–220 words).
1. What exactly do you have to write and who/what for?
2. What kind of language will you use?
3. What will you include in each paragraph?
4. Which of the following are: pros? cons?
  - easier to find a job in a big city
  - police are close by
  - rents can be expensive
  - crime rates often high
  - never get bored
  - can be lonely, impersonal places
5. Which of the justifications/examples below match the ideas in question 4?
  - close to amenities and entertainment such as shops, restaurants and theatres
  - many big companies have their offices in cities
  - lots of people are looking for somewhere to live
  - people in cities rush around and don’t take time to get to know each other
  - have to be careful travelling alone at night
  - big police stations are in cities
Use your answers in Ex. 8 to do the task. Follow the plan below.
Plan
Para 1: present the topic
Para 2: 1st point + pro & con
Para 3: 2nd point + pro & con
Para 4: 3rd point + pro & con
Para 5: sum up and give an opinion

Подробный ответ

1 You have to write a for-and-against essay about living in a flat.

2 You will write in a formal style.

3 You have to write 180–220 words.

Pros: a, c, f

Cons: b, d, e

Cost	Neighbours	Outdoor space
a, e	b, c	d, f

a — paragraph 2
b — paragraph 5
c — paragraph 4
d — paragraph 1
e — paragraph 3

4 Alternative linking words/expressions:

to list: To begin with, Secondly, Lastly
to introduce reasons/examples/justifications: As a result, For instance, such as
to add a point: Also, In addition, What is more
to contrast: Nevertheless, Although, In spite of this
to conclude: To sum up, In conclusion, Taking everything into account

5 The writer begins with a humorous quotation and ends with a summary plus an opinion.

Alternative beginning: Living in a block of flats is a common choice for many people, but it has both advantages and disadvantages.

Alternative ending: To sum up, living in a block of flats can be convenient and practical, but it also has some drawbacks. In my opinion, it depends on a person’s lifestyle and needs.

6 Possible topic sentences:

First of all, how much you spend on a flat is important.
Secondly, we should consider the issue of outdoor space.
Finally, there is the question of neighbours.

1 C
2 E
3 A
4 D
5 B

Topic sentence: C

7b Possible supporting sentences:

First of all, when buying a bicycle you should think about the cost. On the one hand, a cheap bike may save you money. On the other hand, a more expensive one is often stronger and lasts longer. In addition, you may need to pay for repairs and accessories.

1 You have to write an essay for a school English textbook task.

2 You will use a formal style.

3 Each paragraph should cover one point: introduction, first advantage/disadvantage, second advantage/disadvantage, third advantage/disadvantage, and conclusion.

4 Pros: easier to find a job in a big city; police are close by; never get bored

4 Cons: rents can be expensive; crime rates are often high; can be lonely, impersonal places

easier to find a job in a big city — many big companies have their offices in cities
police are close by — big police stations are in cities
rents can be expensive — lots of people are looking for somewhere to live
crime rates often high — have to be careful travelling alone at night
never get bored — close to amenities and entertainment such as shops, restaurants and theatres
can be lonely, impersonal places — people in cities rush around and don’t take time to get to know each other

Living in the city centre has both advantages and disadvantages. Some people enjoy the fast pace of city life, while others find it stressful and expensive.

First of all, it is easier to find a job in a big city. Many big companies have their offices there, so there are more opportunities for work. However, rents can be expensive because lots of people are looking for somewhere to live.

Secondly, the city centre is convenient because police are close by. This can make people feel safer. On the other hand, crime rates are often high, so people have to be careful, especially when travelling alone at night.

Finally, city life is never boring. There are shops, restaurants, theatres and many other places to visit. However, cities can also be lonely and impersonal places because people are always in a hurry and do not take time to get to know each other.

All in all, living in the city centre has both pros and cons. In my opinion, it is a good choice for people who enjoy being busy and having everything nearby, but not for those who prefer peace and quiet.

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